Wednesday 16 April 2008
THE PITCH
THE MOSQUITO DREAM!
1.INTRODUCTION
First we establish the scene, we can hear the exciting trumpeting of our character MOSQUITO CLUMSY FRED ( STANLEY?) before we see him.
2.THE FLIGHT
He is having a bit of difficulty flying due to his since birth damaged wing, but that just does not bother him, he is a happy fella just the way he is.
3.DISCOVERY
Suddenly he stops! He noticed something. CLOSE UP to his eyes. Then CLOSE UP to what he sees through his eyes- TWO CAKES! Sound of biggest excitement.
4.CLUMSY LENDING
As we mentioned our Fred isn't exactly the best flying navigator in the world, but he is trying.
5.UNFOLDING THE SNORKEL
Once he finally stops, there is another difficulty waiting for him...he needs to unfold this heavy, clumsy TRUNK! He sweats a lot.
6.THE UNEXPECTED SLAP
By the time he manages this heavy task, his "host" already notices him....and unfortunately...also slaps him!
7.SAD FALL
His "back to reality" is hard...but it doesn't stop him of loving his life!
8.REALIZATION
When he wakes up from a moment of unconsciousness he sees that life saving poster on the wall. Its a BLOOD DONATION poster- the gastronomic Eden for his kind!
9. SATISFACTION
Fred laughs with his toothless mouth!
1.INTRODUCTION
First we establish the scene, we can hear the exciting trumpeting of our character MOSQUITO CLUMSY FRED ( STANLEY?) before we see him.
2.THE FLIGHT
He is having a bit of difficulty flying due to his since birth damaged wing, but that just does not bother him, he is a happy fella just the way he is.
3.DISCOVERY
Suddenly he stops! He noticed something. CLOSE UP to his eyes. Then CLOSE UP to what he sees through his eyes- TWO CAKES! Sound of biggest excitement.
4.CLUMSY LENDING
As we mentioned our Fred isn't exactly the best flying navigator in the world, but he is trying.
5.UNFOLDING THE SNORKEL
Once he finally stops, there is another difficulty waiting for him...he needs to unfold this heavy, clumsy TRUNK! He sweats a lot.
6.THE UNEXPECTED SLAP
By the time he manages this heavy task, his "host" already notices him....and unfortunately...also slaps him!
7.SAD FALL
His "back to reality" is hard...but it doesn't stop him of loving his life!
8.REALIZATION
When he wakes up from a moment of unconsciousness he sees that life saving poster on the wall. Its a BLOOD DONATION poster- the gastronomic Eden for his kind!
9. SATISFACTION
Fred laughs with his toothless mouth!
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